Narrative planner

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Start writing here! Enter your basic plot ideas on the left and write your story on the right.

Title	The girl who slipped
Orientation	There was a girl that went to the river to climb things. She liked playing on rivers, and she goes there everyday when her parents go to work. She found this big rock and she went on it to jump on the other big rock. She went to this small one and she bend over to make it like a bridge.
Problem	When she bend down she slipped off the rock and she fell into the water. She started drowning. She tried to swim but the water was pushing her down by the waterfall.
Events	She was moving as quick as possible. She started to hit some little rocks that where underneath her. She started to pull down tears because she was scared. She started to call out “HELP ME!”. She was nearly at the end of the waterfall. She heard a car beeping so she started to scream out “HELP ME PLEASE !”. She said it over and over again. She found a tree hanging down. She grabbed the tree and climb up on it. She could clearly speak then because she was out of the water. When she was calling out her parents followed the sound of her voice. Her parents found her hanging on the tree. The parents said “OMG we should go and help her she might die”. The dad said “Okay let's called the ambulance and police”. Her dad calls the police and the ambulance to help her.
Solution	So the ambulance and the police went there as quickly as possible. The police helicopter came to get her off the tree and put her by her parents. She went to her parents and started saying “Im never coming here again its to dangerous”. They drove back home to have a happily ever after.

Today for writing we had to pick a photo to write about. I picked this girl that was bending down on these big rocks. We always need a TOPES in narratives. T stands for Title, O stands for Orentation, P stands for Problem, E stands for event and s stands for solution. We had to work by ourselves for this writing task.