I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Thursday, 5 July 2018
Dialogue
L.I To write a narrative with dialogue
Today for writing we watched this book called The Silent Red Book. Its about a girl and a dog that have a journey together. They like to cuddle, Eat and play. First they meet where the dog was eating from the rubbish bin. The girl told him not to eat out of the rubbish bin. There were two people talking in this story and it was the girl and the dog. We should make up a name for this people in mind. We should name the girl Carrie and the dog trigger. They had a good journey together as friends. They must of stick together and be friends for the rest of the years that they have survived in. They would of been best buddies. They always will play and talk dance and sing and do other things that they like to do. Her mum wouldn't of mind to let there dog inside there house and in the bath tub.
What we Learnt: We learnt what dialogue means.
How we Learnt: We learnt by listening to instructions.
What does dialogue mean:
Dialogue is a written or spoken conversational exchange between two or more people, and a literary and theatrical form that depicts such an exchange.
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Friday, 22 June 2018
Narrative
Today for writing we had to do a narrative for Tom the lost dog.In our narrative we had to add a title, do a orientation, problem, Events and solution.We had to record our narrative when we were finish.We had ro do the narrative on a google doc.When we wrote our events we only needed to do 4 events.Mostly everyone in Mr Wong groups picked the lost dog named Tom.This one was a good photo to write about.We had to do this form about tom the lost dog.Most of Mr Wong groups named him Tom and we wrote other things that we could do.
Here is my Video
Here is my Narrative about Tom the lost dog
Title
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Tom the lost dog
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Orientation
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“I’m lost!” Tom thought as he trudged through the mud on his four legs. The dog wanted to get out of the monstrous forest, so he could get back to his owners. Tom tried to remember the way back home, but he was too scared to think.
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Problem
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Tom doesn’t know how to get back home because he's too scared to think. Tom lost his location to get back to his owners. Tom was thinking and he still couldn't find a way.
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Events
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Tom was kind of stuck in the mud. Tom tried to remember the way back home but he was to scared too think. Tom was stressed that his wasn’t with his owners.
Tom the dog was still in the monstrous forest. He still tried to think we he came from. Tom was still at the forest trying to find a way but he just can’t. Tom just waited on the rock to think were he came from. Tom was so sad that he couldn't find his owners at all.
Tom must of been stressed and so nervous that he was stuck in the puddle of mudd. Tom was so confused that he wasn’t with his owners he was always with someone but know he is just alone.
When tom was walking with his owners the owner's brang a friend of there’s. The friend was holding tom on the lesh and the friend just let the lesh go and then tom ran away in the forest.
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Solution
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Suddenly tom heard a noise saying “Tom where are you”. Tom then started to bark three times. He then ran where the noise came from and he still ran and he found the path. Suddenly tom found his owners he ran to them and jumped on his owners and barked. The owner then said “We can go home now tom”. Tom was happy and he had a nice warm house.
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narrative,
Tom the lost dog,
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