Writing | Making a Recount

L.I: to revise and edit a recount

This week we were getting into group of 2. We had to make a recount. If was with Shinaye. We had to make a recount about our Music Lesson, KiwiSport Lesson, or KiwiCan Lesson. I and my partner picked KiwiSport. When we finished our Recount we had to make a copy of the recount and paste it on a other document. We will have to make the sentence better and improving. We will have to highlight the words. We could delete the sentence and replace it with a improving sentence. We had 40minutes to write a recount. I made 20 edits to Shinaye work and she did 6 edits on my work. If your partner does less edits that means they will have to make 2 recounts about our Music Lesson and KiwiCan Lesson.