Recount | Writing

L.I:to revise the structure of a recount and reaffirm the making criteria.

This week in writing we needed to write a recount if we won the world cup. When we did this we needed to work individually. I wrote about when us girls go to netball every thursday. When we defeat other schools we defeat them. Every game that we had this year we won. When we did this we needed to highlight or change the color of the text. But we could only highlight the words or sentences that we changed. 

Writing | Making a Recount

L.I: to revise and edit a recount

This week we were getting into group of 2. We had to make a recount. If was with Shinaye. We had to make a recount about our Music Lesson, KiwiSport Lesson, or KiwiCan Lesson. I and my partner picked KiwiSport. When we finished our Recount we had to make a copy of the recount and paste it on a other document. We will have to make the sentence better and improving. We will have to highlight the words. We could delete the sentence and replace it with a improving sentence. We had 40minutes to write a recount. I made 20 edits to Shinaye work and she did 6 edits on my work. If your partner does less edits that means they will have to make 2 recounts about our Music Lesson and KiwiCan Lesson.      

Recount (The Best Holiday Ever)

L.I: To Plan and write a recount

This week for writing we had to make a recount. We had to write about one Topic and that was Holidays. First we had to make a plan on a Piece of Paper.  What I did in the holidays was that I went to the Oakley Creek Waterfall, Waterpark, and The fun day that they had at my cousins school.

We had to make a recount that has Paragraphs and T.R.E.E. T.R.E.E stands for (Title, Reveal, Events, and Ending). 

Recount

L.I To write a "reveal" section for a recount.
to plan and write a recount in 40 minutes.


Today for writing we were doing a recount.We then went outside to play a stick game.I had to be buddies with Sila.We then had to get our stick from Mr Wong.When we got our stick me and her started to vs.We couldn't move our feet and we cant fall down.

Recount

   

         Recount Draft

Panmure bridge school was doing a performance.There was a girl named Zoe taught P.B.S the dance.When i got to school i had to wear my uniform because that’s was my costume for the dance.All the teachers and adult’s were there.We were dancing in the hall when we did the performance.Everyone was on the park waiting for the hall to open up.I was waiting for 5min when i went to school.

First... The girls were getting changed up in LS2 and the boys had to get changed in LS1.They even were wearing makeup.Lyndon was the Dj for the performance.               

Next... The kapa haka group went on the (stage) and danced.Room 1 was doing a done it was called war.They had to wear soldier hats and soldier clothes.After room 1 room 5 performed.They did michael jackson.They had to wear Spiked jumpers and white t-shirts.

Then..Mambo number 5 did their dance.The people were screaming saying OOH!!! After Mambo number 5 it was LS1 turn.We did Gangnam style,

Harlem shake, dougie,whip nae nae, single ladies and party rock.After the dance the lights turned off and then we walked of (stage)

Last..The pacifica group performed.After that performance Mia came to the front of the (stage) and said that includes everything to the show.Then Mr Johnston went on the stage and said to the students to bell to your parents.When i belled to my parents they started to smile at me and waving at me.

Scavenger hunt Edit

Recount planner (TREE)

Title	Scavenger hunt
Reveal (orientation)	Groups of 3 Charlize Raera Alayah Solving the clues including the office Tuesday Morning Secret Phrase School Classrooms Go on a scavenger hunt.
Events	First clue Solved the clues Room 10 wrong LS2 wrong Room 1 right Our clue was Tahi Running around We looked at the clue again Finding the answers Got a piece of paper with a clue Worked together as a group Office wrong The answer was 8 We ran to room 8 Incorrect It was 5 Answer was room 5 There was another clue
Ending	Ran to class room Do stretches

Yesterday we went outside to do a scavenger hunt.We went around the school to find the questions.When we did the scavenger hunt we had to get into 3 groups.I worked with Raera and Charlize.We got given this little paper the title was Tahi.Charlize was holding the paper when we were running around the school to find the answers.

We went to room 1 it said star.So then we went back to class to show Mr Wong our papers to see if it was right.Then we went to the office and it had this.

1 6 2

3 S 7

4 8 2

So then we went upstairs to LS2.The word was awesome.So then we went to room 5 to see the word there was 2 words on that paper..It said where did Mr Ogilvie put his equipment and it said wars..We then went to hall because that was where he put his equipment.We came back to LS1 and he said it was incorrect.We had to sit down when we came back to class.Everyone had to go on the mat that was in workspace 2.Then he showed us what it had to say.It was Mr Wong thinks star wars is awesome.When we did that it was kind of easy but it wasn’t.

L.I To edit a recount of an activity.

This week we did a scavenger hunt.When we did this we had to get into 3 groups.I was with Raera and Charlize.Charlize was holding the when we were walking around to get the answer.