The Enormous Tortoise and the two kids.

Title	The Enormous Tortoise and the Two Kids.
Orientation	There were two kids walking home there names were Pj and Kate they were best friends.They were playing when they were walking home and it was really froggy they didn't see.There was a enormous Tortoise his name was Maxy.Kate and Pj were standing they didn’t move because they were scared and they never ever seen are enormous Tortoise like that.
Problem	Maxy thought that Kate and Pj broke his house but they didnt.Maxy was catching Kate and Pj.They were running fast as they could.Kate and Pj were running in circles and circles.They were scared.
Events	Maxy was big like a elephant and Pj and Kate were really scared that they screamed and they were running really fast that they tripped and fell.Pj helped Kate and they said we should fix Maxy house but just to say i have a plan i will do the wall Pj said and Kate said i will do the roof.
Solution	Then Kate and Pj ran to Maxys house and fixed it and Pj said do you still remember the plan Kate said yes they started to fix it.Then Maxy was happy that they fixed the house and Pj and  Kate were safe and there mum came and  pick them up.Mum said how did you guys get here we were walking home but it was really foggy and we lost the footpath said Kate and Pj .Pj said we did you find as um Kate message me and yeah that's how i found you guys.Mum said but least you're okay we are having a feast tomorrow i think i'm having a dream of that!! Then we were happily ever after in my dream!!

I learnt how to do a story Organiser and it's called The Enormous Tortoies and the two kids.It's about when Kate and Pj where walking home and they lost the footpath because it was froggy and dark.And they landed in the dark forest where no one is aloud at.I got the idea from the picture and i wrote it on my story Organiser and i am really proud of myself because i did a lot of writing and i put the stuff in the right spot.