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The sun is shining through the bald trees.The sun is coming up.The cloud is white as snow.
I can see leafless trees.The cloud is so beautiful and white.The light shines so high.The ground is so snowy like white chocolate.The ground is like a soccer field. |
The sun is shining on both sides.There is goal on the side of the leafless trees.The sky is blue like water waves.The brunch is brown like chocolate cupcakes.The trees are so bright like hot chocolate.The sky is beautiful like rainbows.
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I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Wednesday, 24 May 2017
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Alayah i really like your show not tellit has lots of information and it shows me what u learned
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